Beside the tangled mess of cords, I think yours looks quite nice! But of course, assistants are always nice to have on hand . . . not that I would know.
Be warned: what you see here is not my best work. It is what Anne Lamott describes in Bird By Bird as a series of “shitty first drafts.”
Blogging dragged me kicking and screaming out of creative constipation by getting me to actually write. So I do that. A lot. Without worrying about every word choice or comma placement.
Beside the tangled mess of cords, I think yours looks quite nice! But of course, assistants are always nice to have on hand . . . not that I would know.